PART 10 – Natalie Took Eleanor From the Hospital, and the Reason She Gave Forced Me to Question Who Had Really Murdered My Mother

By the time we reached Valley Regional, the entire east wing had been sealed.

Police filled the lobby.

Hospital administrators stood in clusters whispering into phones.

Two security officers were replaying surveillance footage.

I demanded to see it.

Detective Cole tried to slow me down.

I did not slow down.

The footage showed Natalie wearing stolen scrubs and the unconscious officer’s badge.

She pushed a transport chair through the surgical recovery area.

Eleanor sat in it.

Awake.

Weak.

But not restrained.

That changed everything.

“She went willingly,” Priya said.

I leaned closer to the monitor.

Eleanor looked pale and exhausted.

A bandage covered part of her side.

But she was speaking to Natalie.

At one point, Natalie bent down.

Eleanor grabbed her wrist.

Not like a prisoner.

Like someone trying to stop her from leaving.

“Play the audio.”

“There is none.”

“Another camera.”

The administrator shook his head.

The nearest hallway camera captured only video.

They exited through a staff elevator.

Nine minutes later, Natalie drove away in a hospital maintenance vehicle.

“Track it,” Cole said.

“They found it already.”

“Where?”

“Three blocks south.”

Of course.

Natalie had switched vehicles.

Priya folded her arms.

“If Eleanor chose to go, Natalie told her something persuasive.”

I thought about the file stolen from Margaret’s study.

Eleanor’s location.

Eleven years of silence.

Natalie had known.

Perhaps Eleanor knew that now.

My phone rang.

Unknown number.

I answered.

Natalie.

“Do not hang up.”

“Where is Eleanor?”

“With me.”

“Put her on.”

“I will.”

“Now.”

A rustling sound.

Then Eleanor’s voice.

“Grant.”

My knees nearly gave out.

“Are you okay?”

“Yes.”

“Did Natalie force you to leave?”

“No.”

I closed my eyes.

“Why did you go?”

“Because she showed me something.”

“What?”

“She will tell you.”

“No. You tell me.”

Eleanor hesitated.

“Margaret wrote to me.”

I stared at the hospital wall.

“When?”

“Eleven years ago.”

Everything stopped.

“She had your address?”

“Yes.”

“She contacted you?”

“No.”

“But you said—”

“I received the letter yesterday.”

I did not understand.

Natalie came back on the phone.

“My father had it.”

“Douglas intercepted it.”

“Yes.”

“Why?”

“Because it named him.”

“Named him as what?”

“A witness.”

“To what?”

“My mother’s death.”

The words made no sense at first.

“Harriet is alive.”

“I know.”

“No. I mean Douglas witnessed Harriet’s death?”

“Not Harriet.”

Her voice shook.

“My mother.”

I looked at Priya.

She was watching my face.

Natalie continued.

“The woman who raised me was not my biological mother.”

That part no longer surprised me.

Nothing did.

“Who was?”

“Someone named Linda Brennan.”

“Douglas’s wife.”

“Yes.”

“Not biological?”

“No.”

“Then who?”

Natalie inhaled.

“Margaret Mercer.”

For a second I thought I had misheard.

“What?”

“Your mother.”

I gripped the phone.

“That is impossible.”

“Apparently not.”

“Celeste is Margaret’s daughter.”

“I know.”

“You are saying Mom had two daughters?”

“Yes.”

“By Stephen?”

“No.”

“Then who?”

“Douglas.”

I sat down.

Priya whispered, “What happened?”

I held up a hand.

Natalie continued.

Margaret and Douglas had been involved briefly before she married Raymond.

Not romantically in the way Natalie understood it.

Douglas had helped move Margaret after Arthur arranged her escape from Stephen.

During that period, they became close.

Margaret became pregnant.

She did not know until later.

By then Douglas had reconciled with Linda.

Margaret and Raymond were planning their marriage.

She panicked.

Douglas offered a solution.

He and Linda would raise the baby.

Privately.

No St. Agnes paperwork.

No Stephen.

No network.

Margaret agreed.

That child was Natalie.

My wife.

The woman I had married eight years ago.

The woman Margaret had apparently given birth to.

I stood so suddenly the chair scraped backward.

Priya stared at me.

“What?”

I could not answer immediately.

Natalie’s voice broke.

“I did not know.”

I believed that part.

At least at first.

“You married me.”

“I did not know.”

“Did Margaret?”

Silence.

My stomach dropped.

“Did she know who you were when I brought you home?”

“Yes.”

The hallway blurred.

“She knew.”

“Yes.”

“And she let us marry.”

“She did not know when you started dating.”

“But before the wedding?”

“Yes.”

I could barely breathe.

“Why did she say nothing?”

“Because Linda told her Douglas would destroy Raymond if she interfered.”

“Destroy how?”

“Expose the adoption.”

“That would have hurt me, not Raymond.”

“There was more.”

“What?”

“Margaret believed Douglas had evidence connecting Raymond to the original buyers.”

The photograph.

The payment.

The staged documents.

Douglas could make Raymond look guilty.

Margaret feared that if she revealed Natalie’s identity, Douglas would retaliate by destroying Raymond publicly and exposing me before she could prove the truth.

So she waited.

Then she got sick.

Then she died.

I felt sick.

“You knew this when?”

“Today.”

“From what?”

“My father’s safe.”

“Where?”

“He kept a second one beneath the floor in the old Brennan office.”

“Why did you go there?”

“Because Harriet told me before the warehouse that Dad had hidden personal files separately.”

I stared at the floor.

“You have lied so many times I cannot tell which truth is supposed to matter anymore.”

“I know.”

“No, you do not.”

“I know enough.”

I forced myself to ask.

“What did Eleanor see?”

“A letter Margaret wrote her.”

“Why would Margaret write Eleanor about you?”

“Because she wanted to tell you everything.”

The letter explained that Natalie was Margaret’s biological daughter.

That made Natalie my adoptive sister.

Not biologically related to me.

But raised separately.

And married to me without either of us knowing.

Margaret had intended to confess.

Douglas stopped the letter before it reached Eleanor.

Then Margaret died.

“What does this have to do with her death?”

Natalie’s voice lowered.

“My father wrote a note on the envelope.”

“What note?”

“Margaret knows I kept the letter. Pierce says we have six days.”

The exact interval.

Six days before Margaret died.

I stood in the hospital corridor staring at nothing.

“Pierce killed her.”

“I think so.”

“For Douglas?”

“No.”

“Stephen?”

“I do not know.”

“Where are you?”

“I cannot tell you.”

“Then put Eleanor back on.”

Eleanor returned.

“Grant.”

“Do you trust her?”

“No.”

The honesty surprised me.

“Then why are you with her?”

“Because she knows where Margaret’s other letters are.”

“What letters?”

“The ones she wrote you.”

I closed my eyes.

“Take them to police.”

“We cannot.”

“Why?”

“Because the person holding them is still inside the network.”

“Who?”

Eleanor hesitated.

“Someone you trust.”

Every person I trusted was disappearing one by one.

“Name them.”

“I need proof first.”

“Stop protecting me.”

“I am not.”

“Yes, you are. Everyone keeps deciding what I should know.”

Silence.

Then Eleanor said, “You are right.”

I waited.

“The letters are with Raymond.”

I almost laughed.

“Dad?”

“Yes.”

“He has had them?”

“According to Margaret’s letter, yes.”

“Then why not ask him?”

“Because one of the letters says he was instructed never to give them to you unless Margaret’s death was proven unnatural.”

My blood went cold.

Raymond knew there was a condition attached to her letters.

Did he know why?

I hung up and went straight to intensive care.

Raymond was awake.

He saw my face and knew immediately.

“You found out about Natalie.”

“Yes.”

His eyes closed.

“You knew.”

“Yes.”

“For how long?”

“Since before your wedding.”

The anger came so fast it almost felt clean.

“You stood beside me at the altar.”

“Yes.”

“You let me marry Mom’s daughter.”

“She is not your blood relative.”

“That is your defense?”

“No.”

“Then what is?”

“There isn’t one.”

I paced away.

“Why didn’t you tell me?”

“Margaret begged me not to.”

“She was dead before the wedding.”

“Yes.”

“So what did her fear have to do with it?”

“Everything.”

Raymond said Margaret had left instructions.

Do not expose Natalie until Douglas and Pierce can no longer retaliate.

Margaret believed Natalie was innocent.

She wanted both of us protected.

Then Raymond made his own choice.

He kept waiting.

Year after year.

Douglas remained alive.

Pierce supposedly died.

Stephen disappeared.

Raymond convinced himself the danger had passed but the revelation would only destroy two lives.

“So you decided our marriage was easier than truth.”

“Yes.”

He said it without looking away.

I had never hated him.

Not really.

Even after the adoption secrets.

Even after all the delays.

In that moment, I came close.

“Where are Mom’s letters?”

He looked toward the bedside cabinet.

“Not here.”

“Where?”

“In my garage.”

“Which garage?”

“The storage unit behind my old shop.”

“Key?”

“Priya has it.”

Priya, who had followed me into the room, looked startled.

“I have a key to your evidence locker.”

“Same key.”

She reached into her bag.

Raymond continued.

“There is a green metal cabinet. Bottom drawer.”

I turned to go.

“Grant.”

I stopped.

“There is something else.”

I almost laughed.

“There always is.”

His face tightened.

“Margaret did not die the night the hospice report says she did.”

I turned slowly.

“What?”

“She died twelve hours earlier.”

“Why was the time changed?”

“Pierce altered it.”

“Why?”

“Because somebody visited her during those twelve hours.”

“Who?”

Raymond stared at me.

“Natalie.”

I felt everything inside me go still.

“She was there?”

“Yes.”

“Did she know Margaret was her mother?”

“No.”

“Why was she there?”

“She came to confront Margaret about the Vale trust.”

“Before we were married?”

“We were already engaged.”

I stared at him.

“You told me Natalie knew almost nothing then.”

“I thought she knew only about the money.”

“What happened?”

“Margaret sent me out.”

“For how long?”

“Twenty minutes.”

“When you came back?”

“Natalie was gone.”

“And Mom?”

“Alive.”

I exhaled.

“For how long?”

“Another hour.”

“So Natalie did not kill her.”

“I did not say that.”

“What happened in that hour?”

Raymond’s eyes filled.

“Margaret told me Natalie had made a terrible choice.”

“What choice?”

“She had given Pierce access to the house.”

I stared at him.

“Natalie let Pierce in?”

“She claimed she did not know what he intended.”

“And Pierce?”

“He came after Natalie left.”

“To kill Mom.”

Raymond nodded.

“What did you do?”

“I fought him.”

“You never told police.”

“He threatened you.”

“Of course he did.”

“He had photographs of you at work. Natalie at home. Our house. Eleanor’s address.”

Every route led back to fear.

Every silence justified itself through another threat.

“Did you see him give her anything?”

“No.”

“Then how did she die?”

Raymond looked away.

“When I returned to the bedroom after Pierce left, Margaret had already stopped breathing.”

“Why did Pierce leave?”

“Because I stabbed him.”

I stared at him.

“What?”

“In the side.”

That scar on Pierce.

I remembered blood on his shirt at the hospital.

Not from years ago, but the old scar might still be there.

Raymond continued.

Pierce escaped.

Raymond called the hospice number.

The nurse who arrived worked under Pierce.

She changed the recorded time of death.

Raymond did not understand why then.

Later he realized the false time created an alibi.

For Pierce.

And for someone else.

“Who?”

Raymond looked directly at me.

“Douglas.”

Douglas had been at a public charity dinner at the official time Margaret died.

But at the real time?

No one knew.

Priya’s phone rang.

She listened.

Then looked at us.

“They found Eleanor and Natalie.”

“Where?”

“Old Brennan office.”

“Alive?”

“Yes.”

Relief lasted half a second.

“There is another problem.”

“What?”

“The building is on fire.”


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